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Sin vuelta atras by Montalve, literature

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Sin vuelta atras

Cuando despertó, descubrió que había ganado el avión presidencial. El descubrimiento no fue de golpe como podría esperarse, sino lento y paulatino. Igual que el retorno a la consciencia. Como cada mañana se levantó más dormido que despierto. Prendió la cafetera y el televisor antes de meterse a bañar. El sonido de la regadera ahogó el parloteó familiar del noticiero, pero no es como si le prestara atención. Solo quería llenar con algo, lo que fuera, el silencio matutino que perduraba, igual que la cama fría, desde el divorcio. Es por eso que le había comprado el boleto a Rosita. No porque creyera, o quisiera, la posibilidad de ganarse el avión. Dios me libre, pensó en ese momento. No, lo compró con la esperanza de llevarla a la cama. Dígase, lo compró por caliente y pendejo. Cuando Rosita llegó a ofrecerle el boleto lo hizo con ojos llorosos, el escote ligeramente abierto y descansó la mano sobre su antebrazo. La pobre lo había adquirido urgida por su madre y ahora no tenían ni para

Death Battle: Kim Possible vs. Robin Fight! by torygreen, literature

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Death Battle: Kim Possible vs. Robin Fight!

Tory: Alright, the combantents are set, let's end this debate once and for all! Spike: It's time for a Death, Kung Fu style, Battttttleeeee! ................ Location: Cartoon Network Studios! (one Grappling hock comes from a side and Kim is climbing on the roof!) Kim: Alright, I'm in Wade! Now the disc should be inside! Just sneak in the air vent, and destroy the disc! Easy! Wade: Right, but be careful! Who knows what Cartoon Network has up their Sleves to make sure nothing bad happens to the show! Kim: (chuckle) Please Wade, I've handled much worse, (Breaks a vent and crawls in it!) What could they have to stop me? (Another Grapplin

Top 20 Cartoons of 2010 (20-11)75 watchers Special by torygreen, journal

Top 20 Cartoons of 2010 (20-11)75 watchers Special

Mar 19, 2016

Well, I hope you had a great St. Patricks day, I know I did! Before I say the rules, I just wanna say thank you to everyone who wished me a happy birthday, and the comic strip that LuckyFredFan made for me, it was just pure awesome, also the fan art that E2Z made was just as awesome! Also, I'm making this into a 2 part series so I can build hype, because I have the death Battle I plan to finish by march, as well as one or two reviews from my team! For example, Serena is reviewing "One Punch Man" and Flogger is reviewing Captain America, as well as the Avengers before March ends! So that's that, here's the rules! These's are my top 20 shows of

The Beginning of the End. (part 2) by Deajua825, journal

The Beginning of the End. (part 2)

Mar 18, 2016

Name: Brylea Dillon Manahan Date: Fall 2014Grade: 9th Grade "My Dad and Cancer" Well. First off I'll say my Dad and I had an unbreakable bond. Every time I went over to his house on the weekends we'd eat Josie's pizza and drink Mtn Dew. So basically, he was my best friend and helped me with anything. Mostly with being bullied. But when I was about 11 everything changed. He got a girlfriend and started hanging out with the wrong people. I remember the day my Mom told me I couldn't see my Dad anymore. We had a guest over (who I will not name for privacy reasons) spending the night that day and I was crying. And I cried myself to sleep that

6 Tips for Writing Your Story's Rising Action by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature

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6 Tips for Writing Your Story's Rising Action

6 Tips for Writing Your Story's Rising Action Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 6 “Plot Points” – Section 4 “Rising Action” “K'Nuckles: Disappointment is the best adventure! Flapjack: It is? K'Nuckles: Do you feel all hollow inside? Flapjack: Yes. K'Nuckles: Wished you'd stayed in bed this morning? Flapjack: A little... K'Nuckles: Ever felt that way before? Flapjack: Nope! K'Nuckles: ADVENTURE!” -The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack by Mark Van Orman Welcome to Act II of your story! You're now on a solid course towards the adventure that your story was made for—set into motion by a

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LPAki

Oct 29, 2022

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